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March FADness: 03/29/2008: Green; Untitled (387 Words) — No Comments

  1. I’m with Liz. Fascinating world, character and prose. This piece almost begs to have my questions answered.

    Like with Gwennie Girl, I’m also amazed by YOUR Energizer Buzzy imagination, Noony Girl.

  2. Oh, mine doesn’t even come close to hers! She has a million different worlds she could suck us into – each one as real as the next. So, this is your ‘green’ theme you were talking about – loved it! Very subtle but totally on point.

    Loved this line: ““We will,” Kenning agreed, or threatened. It wasn’t clear from his tone.”

    That’s just an awesome use of a dialogue tag – making it really count.

    Off to read the continuation now! *smooches*

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