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FFC Story for 03/12/2008, Letters and Numbers: Untitled (1,000 Words) — No Comments

  1. I third that. I was thinking alien invasion. You kept the tension and flirtatious aspects well-balanced throughout and the ending was a pleasing surprise! =)

    ~Gwen

  2. Wow! You had me completely sucked in. You had the tension level through the roof, and I was waiting for the guy to turn into a psychopathic serial killer. Fabulous twist at the end.

  3. you gave this quite a twist and I didn’t see the end coming at all, but in fairness to me I am an Aussie and we don’t have fraternity’s or an equivalent 🙂

  4. Oh, no! My first thought about the Greek alphabet was that he was going Greek. But then I got caught up in the whole invasion thing, too.

    Nicely twisted, although I’m not sure what he sees in her — that’s one of those things I never understood, though. She’s not terribly nice, yet she’s desirable. That’s almost as weird as the Nines might have been.