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March FADness: 03/11/2008: Gambler’s Choice, Untitled (998 Words) — No Comments

  1. Your pacing here was excellent – just the right amount of description so that I could feel the heat and the urgency, but not enough to slow it down one iota. Loved that. I also love that you somehow built enough in with the repetition of the names, and the way everyone responded that when it got down to the end, I was very moved by the revelation of the relationship between Larisa and Boira. Very well done!