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March FADness: Story 03/01/2008: Flying; Untitled (921 Words) — No Comments

  1. Okay… *NOW* it all makes sense. Um… this is awesome world-building and characterization. I hope you are planning on doing more with it!

  2. That’s a whole world build up, did you make this all up in one day? Just for this story?

    You raised more questions than you answered, but it caught my interest. Would be nice if I find more of this in the other stories. *goes to look*

  3. I really like this. And I particularly appreciated the sentence, “Fenton wanted to smile at the names the mages chose for themselves, but learned long ago the danger of appearing disrespectful to any of the Order.” Nicely done!