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FFC Story for 04/15/2008: “Elementary” (617 Words) — No Comments

  1. I really enjoyed this! It’s cute and funny and also very descriptive. I like their dialog throughout and their reactions at the end, very real and personable. Nicely done!!

  2. I love how a reader might think the they were sent to do the house cleaning – but in reality it was a spiritual clean up. Clever and with a gentle touch to it. Lovely!

  3. Yaay! Very interesting. I was hoping you’d do something like this, so of course I’M not disappointed.

    Loved the last sentence.

  4. I like this, especially that Grant has some redeeming qualities after all. It’s almost hard to like him until the end. And then, I almost melted with Greta.

    I’d love to see more!

  5. It almost feels like a glimpse out of my life. Lovely descriptions and the characterizations were terrific. Spot on. Great job!