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May FFC: Disguises, “The Russian Jades, Chapter 2” (908 Words) — No Comments

  1. Wow o.o Twisted! (In a totally awesome way of course!) Now I’m gonna have to flip back and Find the first one! Amazing Cat!

  2. Now that is intriguing, and I’m hooked…want to know who she really is and what is she going to mean to him? I like the way the conversations drew me into the story, slowly but surely! Of course now you have to write the next chapter. *grin*

  3. You are such a tease, Noony.

    But I wouldn’t have it any other way, because this is what suspense is made of. Hints within hints–nothing overt. You nailed it, sista.

  4. Cool. That is the only word I can think of. I have a feeling/hope you’re stewing up something more on this?

    I particularly liked the dialogue in this piece – short, clipped, direct. It said everything we needed to know, and moved like natural conversation, while still telling a lot about the characters.

    How does she do it, Gwennie wonders . . .